Deanna DeBrine Mascle introduced me to e new form of poetry: Tanka. It is a Japanese tradition, much like Haiku, but slightly longer. Instead of Haiku’s 5,7,5 syllable pattern Tanka contains 5,7,5,7,7 syllable lines. Thematically, Tanka is like Haiku: nature, emotion, and love. I’ve always struggled with Haiku, but this form seems more approachable to me, perhaps because it is longer. I don’t know for sure, but my Intro to Comp students will play with this form during our poetry unit next Spring.
May I go back to the beach, now?
The hammock waits ….
Love that line .. maybe I need a rest … dang you, reality!